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Atton swings at Koren's neck.
The three slashes could work better. Koren drops down, unnaturally fast, beneath both Atton and Will's swords, and spins, batting away Guppy's sword with his own, spurs sliding out of his feet to slash at the three's ankles as he turns.
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The three slashes could work better. Koren drops down, unnaturally fast, beneath both Atton and Will's swords, and spins, batting away Guppy's sword with his own, spurs sliding out of his feet to slash at the three's ankles as he turns.